<EDIT> It's complete! All 30 pages!
Second draft of the comic I'm working on.naha-def.deviantart.com/art/ex…
I took in the compliments on yesterday’s piece, and split it with the criticism, and I quite like this result. First draft on top, second draft below.
Grey pencil instead of blue, just yellow and grey, and inks to tighten it up, without making it all about the ink.