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Story page 1 by naha-def Story page 1 by naha-def
<EDIT> It's complete!  All 30 pages!

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Second draft of the comic I'm working on.
naha-def.deviantart.com/art/ex…

I took in the compliments on yesterday’s piece, and split it with the criticism, and I quite like this result. First draft on top, second draft below.

Grey pencil instead of blue, just yellow and grey, and inks to tighten it up, without making it all about the ink.



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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There was a dreamlike quality to the original style, reminiscent of Bastien Vives' "Dans mes yeux", but I can understand why this is a better choice from a storytelling point of view.
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naha-def Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I liked the original as well, but there wasn't enough contrast to the main characters.
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The-Mirrorball-Man Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I understand. :nod:
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BrujaBear Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
ooh! like this combo very well! :)
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naha-def Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you!
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VillarealVal Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Nice work! Reminds me a lot of The Smith's song "How soon is now".
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naha-def Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ah, but he won't be leaving on his own ;)  Ultimately, the emotions expressed won't be so far off of that though, and it's good company to be in.  Thanks!
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